Caitlin

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Monday, May 07, 2007

microfiction- the sycamore forest

I was going through the great woods where the sycamore trees grow. There, I met a toad. I knelt down aside him, he saw me and croaked a thundering, drawn out, roar. He was sad. The golden rays of the evening sun illuminated his skin. With that, the wretched creature peered around the forest, past the dark trees. I hated him, so I killed him. It wasn’t anything personal, I just never took a liking for small creatures. When I was little, I had a bunny.

So I sat there, next to the newly deceased corpse. I was still, listening to the gentle crackle of the leaves, in the woods. If only I hadn’t killed the frog. Oh well, what’s done can not be reversed. For now, I’ll just indulge in my tranquil surroundings, where the pinewood grows fresh.

My gown fanned out beneath me, the lace now muddled with leaves and dirt. The white satin was stained brown from the soil of my mother’s garden. I was back in my house, my frog in the terrarium beside me, and the trees, gently rustling outside.

3 Comments:

Blogger THORtheBUNNY said...

Yet another piece I'm not sure I fully understand. Why did you bring up the bunny? Was the frog in the terrarium the same one you killed? Is the forest just an imagination thing in the garden? I like it, I don't really get it, but I like it. The whole childlike making a mess of things bit is a pretty cool theme for a piece. Far more questions than answers and I like that. Also, I too like killing small animals.

6:10 PM  
Blogger Sam C said...

yay for MURDER and DEATH! hooray! i like how killing the frog was not a big deal at all. and i like the description of your dress in the end. and the use of the word "muddled." heehee, muddled! <3

6:32 AM  
Blogger Mr. Popken said...

Perhaps you should make a Macbeth allusion: "What's done is done" or "What's done cannot be undone" (subtle yet important difference) in place of "What's done cannot be reversed."

I wondered about the the two frogs as well. I liked the bunny line. It's ambiguous but intriguiging. Nice job in conclusion, "and the trees, gently rustling outside."

Very interesting! Perhaps you can illuminate us a little bit?

6:30 AM  

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