Indept. piece #6--the rain drop
But when the rain fell
Oh so high
It pattered to the floor
Flooding the village(
The drop kissed the flower
And was
swept
away
Never to be seen
Ev
er
Again)
But so on it went
with
the world turning round
posted by CaitlinL @ 6:34 AM
2 Comments:
Wow, Cait, I really like this. Very cummings-esque, but not meerely structurally-there's great depth despite your spare diction. One of yor best!
your, yor, ahh, what's the difference? spelling is a lower-level thinking skill anyway, right?
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