Caitlin

this blog is for creative writing. thats why i have it.

Tuesday, July 06, 2010

DOUBLE RAINBOW SONG!!

Friday, June 08, 2007

Intro to Indept Piece #10

I wrote this piece because it was due. Schools coming to an end, so I figure I better turn in all my assignments. I just finished a book that had a character named Frannie. I really wanted this story to be good, but it didn’t come out that way. There was really no point to writing this, but at least “I tried”. Oh well, what can one expect?

Indept. Piece #10 - Frannie

Frannie got on the motorcycle. She could feel the engine purring beneath her legs, and liked it. Her white sundress fanned out beside the seat. She switched into gear, and pressed the throttle. The bike gave a little leap forward, but quickly smoothed out. She went riding down the deserted road. Up ahead was a mountain, which was where her house was. There hadn’t been any people for at least two months, but at this time there never were. After several minutes Frannie reached the base of the mountain, lit a cigarette, and dismounted the cycle. She began the trek up to her house.

After a grueling two hour hike, she reached her house. The eastern side of the wall was slightly singed from the fire. Up in the desert, the fire trucks took half an hour to get here, at full speed. She had tried her best to put it out, but the fire spread quicker than she thought it would. Frannie opened the door to the mess that was her living room. She lived all alone, with no pets, or family. At 42, she knew she would never find anyone, but that didn’t bother her. In the mountains of the desert she would never need anyone.

The next day, Frannie got up at 3 AM. The moon was still projecting that cold intermittent light across the desert. She hated mornings like these. The air was bitter, and it froze her lungs as she gasped for a breath. She focused her eyes on the distant, single coyote, howling at the moon, for the life he had lost.

Wednesday, June 06, 2007

Umm...insight to high school?

Most everyone you will meet in high school will be something of a delusional liar. You will constantly bother yourself with the opinions of others, while desperately trying to figure out if you fit in. You’re all doomed to repeat monotonous tasks, despite the fact that you have no idea how doing a presentation in global will help you understand nomads any better. Everybody lies, and no one really cares about you as much as you think. They let you see as much as they want you to see, but they don’t tell you that. Backstabbing and drama are a way of life in high school, even though you may try to avoid it. Face it, high school isn’t as different from middle school as you may hope, but it can be a way for you to change. When you reach high school, you have more opportunities to develop more friends. People interact with upperclassmen more often due to the mixture of grade levels in classes like gym, or electives. In this attempt to provide “insight” into high school, I can only hope to help you realize that the only way to truly help you is to ensure that nothing can be guaranteed, and things aren’t as bad as they seem.

Thursday, May 31, 2007

Intro. to my last Indept. Piece

I wrote this just before the awards night. I was hoping for it to be cancelled, but as of now, my mom is still making me go. Its hard to come up with ideas on what to write about, but recently i heard about this movie called bridges. In this film, a man set up a video camera and jsut filmed people walking off bridges. It was apparently very big, and very controversial. So, i decided to write a story about it. Maybe this is similar to one of their stories.

I was dead, lying above the end of the world

I stood before the edge, facing due north. If you let go just enough, the wind will hold you as you perilously dangle above the water. However, if the wind stops, you better hope that your reflexes work quicker than ever before. The wind was light today, it was brisk, slowly feeling my face as it passed. I glanced around, nothing was there. The bridge wasn’t crowded, of course at 4:37 AM, it wouldn’t be. This morning was different, I felt good. It was quick, and I was energized, I decided to walk those 43 blocks. I haven’t walked to work in ages, and maybe I shouldn’t have ever stopped.

This particular morning I couldn’t see that famous skyline. The sun was still in its waking stages, it made for a beautiful scene, but nevertheless, I couldn’t see very far. As I was busy ogling my view a man in full suit passed me. He quickly darted his eyes away, when I met his gaze, but I knew he would regret that later. He would even regret walking to work later.

No one realizes the scarcity of those little moments, you know, those little moments of self reflection, when rational thought leaves, but intelligence is still present. They’re not brought on by conscious thought, but rather when the mind realizes an opportunity to heal. As I peered into the parting darkness, I did not have one of those moments. But what I did have was something just short of a revelation. I stepped onto the railing. Perhaps I looked like Rose in that movie “The Titanic”, perhaps I just looked crazy, but when I looked down, I knew how I felt.

The plunge. Like a swan, ever so gracefully, I dove. My dress fluttered out as I went head first to my death. I was elated. Freedom had incinerated itself into my bones. I could imagine the man turning around and gawking at my bravery. My light brown hair was whisked away from my face as the wind whistled past me. Oh! The depths of darkness I was approaching would be magnificent! I could see the water below me. It turned from this blue to purple, eventually into black. I hit. The impact was shattering, with that the black engulfed me.

My wind had stopped.

Friday, May 18, 2007

Intro to Indept. piece #8

I was actually inspired by a song I heard, but the dad was a samurai, so it was little bit different. This story is, more or less, the epitome of dysfunction. Really, I think this story tells itself. There most certainly are parts I’d change, but I couldn’t get them right, so I let them be.

Independent piece #8- Miss. Humphrey, the beautiful Miss Humphrey

When my father would come home, he’d forget about the killing. Every time he walked in, the first thing he did was kick the dog. Its foaming mouth, a result of starvation, would snap out at his leg, but would always come up fruitless. “Get in bed!” he would bellow to us, as we ran away. We were afraid of him, terrified. His job was unbearable, and as a result, he took a heavy hand towards us. Me and my little brother often bore the remnants of his temper, but we could stand it, our youngest sister couldn’t. She was beaten to death 3 months ago. I loved my dad, I knew he loved me too, he just didn’t know how to show it, but it was okay. My mother, beautiful as she was, was now ragged and worn. At night I could hear her cry, and beg with my father to stop, stop what, I don’t know.

School was a sanctuary. My teacher was always so nice. She had wavy brown hair, and a gentle face. Her name was Miss. Humphrey, or Miss. Hum, for short. We were always allowed to eat in school, and we could play in the playground during lunch. One day she approached me, “Honey, I was wondering, where are those bruises on your arm from?” her face was mellow, but serious. “Oh, um, I’m not sure.” I replied. My eyes couldn’t meet hers. Her face grew taught and I knew I had upset her. “Would it be alright if I came over for dinner one night?” I smiled, of course! I shook my head, and a large smile plastered itself on my face.

The following night she came over, six o’clock sharp. She had on a maternal blue dress with some flowers, it came to slightly above her ankles. “Hi, Miss Hum! My dad will be home from work in a couple of minutes, but my mom is in the kitchen, c’mon!” I took her hand and gladly led her to the dank kitchen. Dishes were piled in the sink, and my mom looked sick. “Hello, Miss Humphrey, I’m Mrs. Gina Glen. It’s a pleasure to meet you.” My mother said. “Would you please excuse me a moment?” My mom walked away, half stumbling. I heard her go into the bathroom, she was vomiting.

Suddenly the front door thrust open. My dad let out an angry roar and searched for the dog, no where to be seen. He looked up and saw Miss Hum, falling back a little he bellowed, “Who the f*ck is this b*tch!?” startled, Miss Hum replied “I’m Miss. Humphrey, your daughter’s teacher. Nice to me-” my father slapped her. “Get the f*ck outta my goddamn house!” he began to charge towards her. A slight gasp escaped between her lips, as her eyes grew wide. He grasped her in his arms and threw her to the floor. She crouched in the feeble position and tried to ward off the blows to her stomach. “Daddy!! NO!! Stop, daddy, please!” I screeched. My feeble voice held no weight in his world. He wasn’t going to stop. “Mom! Mommy!? Mom! Help!?” she was no where in sight. I watched in despair as my father mercilessly pounded Miss. Hum, the beautiful Miss, Hum. Blood began gathering underneath her head, and I could see her body beginning to unfold with each blow. She was dead. I would never forgive my father for this. I would love him no more

Intro to Indept. piece #7

I just sat down and started writing. It began as a story about a girl, but ended up with a first person P.O.V., so, what are you going to do? It isn’t an autobiography, although parts of this might mimic some of my life. I wrote this keeping in mind “Catcher in the Rye”, because he was so emo and this girl seemed a little emo as well. I hated this book and began hating this girl as well. But I did like the end, with the girl just lying in the grass. I almost never give names in my stories, and that what I like. The friend in the beginning can represent tons of people, or no one. The main character can probably relate to a bevy of people. I wrote this piece as a way to let out more frustration than I actually have.

Indept Piece #7

Theres no title for this piece
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“Umm…ya. I don’t care. He can go f*ck her if he damn well feels like it. Whatever, I’m not going out with him anymore.” Her ignorance was overwhelming, she couldn’t tell that he really just wanted her attention. After spending 4 years of her life with him, she dumped him. “You’re retarded, you know that?” I laughed. It was nothing important, really, it wasn’t like she couldn’t get him back, in fact she could just about get anyone. Her face was flawless, and she had these big stunning eyes. “Ha-ha. I know.” She said, lighting a cigarette. We continued walking down the street, leaving a trail of smoke behind us. “So, uh, what are you going to do this weekend?” I asked, making small talk. “Oh you know, the usual” by that she meant going to some exclusive party, that I was never invited to, and getting high, or drunk, or a combination of both. “Sweet.” Another Friday night alone.

I came up to my house. The flowers in bloom certainly did exaggerate the features of the house, but they were gorgeous, nevertheless. “Mom!? I’m home!” I yelled up the stairs. She was in the back, probably wrapping presents for god-knows-who. “Okay! I’m going to run out to get bagels and pick up Sam from the gym. Later I’ve got to bring Couri, Sean, and Shane to boy scouts.” She yelled through the wooden door separating us. “Iight, do you know if I’m doing anything tonight?” I asked, opening the door to an explosion of shiny wrapping paper and tape. “You know, you can always have some friends over.” She pushed. Okay, sure, whatever, no. I walked to my room, begrudgingly weighing my options of activities planned for tonight. Bah, there’s nothing. No doubt all my friends would be out having a grand time with my other friends. I sat on my bed, and prepared to take a nap.

I’m woken up at 5:30, by my sister banging on the door. “Open up!” she blasted through the door. Ugghhh, I have a massive headache, it must’ve been the Bacardi I had before I went to sleep, a holocaust survivor once told me the best remedy is a sip of champagne, I think I’ll take her advice. I unlock the door to Sam standing there, “What did you do!?” she bellowed, what? What the hell is she talking about? “Cool, even when I’m asleep I still get in trouble.” I said. He seemed strangely startled, but moved past me. “Sam, what are you talking about?” She glanced in my direction, but said nothing. Okay, whatever. I left my room in a haze. The headache was getting worse and my hopes of doing something were slowly withering away. I’m such a loser.
I stumble to the computer, where I expect to waste away for the next couple of hours. I log onto aim, dozens of away messages pop up, “Out with mah peeps!”, “Going to party it up tonight!”, “With the coolest people, Eva!!! Ilu guyzz.”, etc. Grrreat. So now I will waste away, by myself. I don’t suppose it’s that people don’t like me, its just they like other people more. I enjoy being by myself most nights. Although I have no stories to tell, and no fascinating moments to revel about, I guess I’ll make do with my life as is. No emails, no comments on myspace, no messages on facebook. Cool, just awesome. I get off and walk to the T.V., don’t fail me now. Occupied, awesome, now what? There really is nothing to do in a small town, with limited activities. Sam and Casey were the only people home. Well, they’re not going to do anything tonight, I guess. I walked outside, and laid in the grass. The threatening onslaught of rain didn’t matter, I was going to stay out there if it began to rain, even if I had to drown. The wind moved past me, the chill crept into my bones, and the gray skies began to swell. An ant walked across my hand, and scurried off when I began to stir. Winter was approaching, it would be long, too long. I tired listening to the sounds of nature, but there was nothing to be heard. No birds were out, no field mice could be heard twittering, the world was dead. I was dead, lying beneath the end of the world.

Monday, May 07, 2007

microfiction- the sycamore forest

I was going through the great woods where the sycamore trees grow. There, I met a toad. I knelt down aside him, he saw me and croaked a thundering, drawn out, roar. He was sad. The golden rays of the evening sun illuminated his skin. With that, the wretched creature peered around the forest, past the dark trees. I hated him, so I killed him. It wasn’t anything personal, I just never took a liking for small creatures. When I was little, I had a bunny.

So I sat there, next to the newly deceased corpse. I was still, listening to the gentle crackle of the leaves, in the woods. If only I hadn’t killed the frog. Oh well, what’s done can not be reversed. For now, I’ll just indulge in my tranquil surroundings, where the pinewood grows fresh.

My gown fanned out beneath me, the lace now muddled with leaves and dirt. The white satin was stained brown from the soil of my mother’s garden. I was back in my house, my frog in the terrarium beside me, and the trees, gently rustling outside.

Thursday, April 26, 2007

Screenplay -- UNICORNS!

The Tale of the Strange Unicorn Picture Show
A screen play by
Caitlin L

The first image is of red velvet cinema curtains. The opening music is cued in. The curtains open, revealing the title “The Tale of the Strange Unicorn Picture Show”. Screen goes to black, its old and scratchy, burnt celluloid cuts in.

There’s a quiet bell; creepy, yet happy. The bells go to chorus as 2 unicorns appear. The 2 unicorns have pastel manes and tails, with white bodies. CHARLIE and CHUCK are prancing around.

CHARLIE:: “hey, so, chuck, what’d’ya wanna do?”
CHUCK:: “lets go down to the river, under the overpass. We can play cards.”
CHARLIE:: “yeah. Okay, good idea. Just, hold on, let me get my cards from home.”

CHARLIE walks off towards a tree, and just stands there (might I remind you, this is a very poorly produced movie). CHUCK starts to whistle and look around. He quickly turns around behind him, and snaps back forward, stares at the camera. He swishes his tail. CHARLIE returns.

CHARLIE:: “iight, man. I got my cards, but I’m missing the 4 of clubs, the queen of diamonds, and all of my jacks.”

CHUCK glares at CHARLIE and bulges his eyes. He seems confused

CHUCK:: “umm…okay, I guess. I don’t know how we’ll ever play any normal game with this deck, but sure, whatever. Let’s go.”
CHARLIE:: “woohoo sweet! Hey man, let’s pick up some ciggys before we go.”
CHUCK:: “are you kidding me? You must be. You’re retarded, you know that? First off, I don’t smoke, secondly, we couldn’t get some ciggys if we wanted to. Jesus Christ, don’t even talk to me again.”

CHARLIE and CHUCK walk off together. CHARLIE looks at CHUCK.
CHUCK:: “What? What do you want?”
CHARLIE:: “Well, I don’t know. I just kinda wanted to apologize. I didn’t know you’d be so offended.”
CHUCK:: “dude, you’re such a fag. Shut up. Let’s just go play some cards.”
CHARLIE:: “Okay…hey, man. Do you wanna hold ma hand?”
CHUCK:: “Oh my GOD, NO! dude, you don’t even have a hand, you retard. Jesus Christ, no. Oh man, you’re such a fag.”

CHARLIE and CHUCK walk off together. With CHUCK awkwardly avoiding CHARLIE’s gaze.